From birth stubborn
with fire and water
a hotheaded boy
a calm thoughtful guy
with anger and honor
a passion for boxing
visions blurry
high adrenaline
hearts pumping
telling you to keep going
heads damaged
telling you to stop now
you’ve been here before
you’ll do it again
your a thoughtful person that enjoys his quiet time
but you can’t help to enjoy the rush
going over the limits is what you like
having a headache and have the need to throw up after
I’m use to it now
qutting isn’t an option when I care
after all I’m human
Jose, this is a great poem. You really describe what kind of a person you are and how relentless you are towards achieving your goals. I liked how you referred to yourself as a hotheaded boy, as it is a creative way to describe anger in yourself. I enjoyed reading this, and I hope you continue writing these cool creative poems.
This poem is strong, it is very descriptive of what you have a passion for. This also shows the type of person you are and how you feel towards yourself. The part where you put quitting as not being an option shows your persistence in accomplishing what your aiming for.