Why I’m athletic as hell
I wasn’t 3 years old yet
My dad loved soccer
He played it a lot back then
He played it in his hometown
It’s passed down in my family
Damn, was he athletic as hell
I was 3 years old
Dad teaching me soccer
Damn, was I becoming athletic as hell
That’s all I would like to do
Play soccer
I’d come from school and play it in my backyard
Overall, sports is what made me today
You’ve got to be very energetic
That’s what it takes to play sports
Especially when it’s competitive
Playing club soccer was fun
It taught me to be hard physically
Not soft
I’m athletic as hell
My calves have become stronger due to soccer
Game begins
I give it my best effort
Both halves are over
We win
Damn, I’m athletic as hell
If you’re not athletic
There can be downsides
They can begin to gain weight
Be Like me, athletic as hell
Dear Oscar I really like your story but just keep doing it.
Dear Oscar,
I really liked reading your Memoir because it was very interesting. A part that I liked about your Memoir is “ I’d come from school and play it in my backyard”. I really like this part because you’re explaining that you love soccer and that was your first thing you would do when you got home. A good thing is that your dad taught you how to play soccer. Because that is what inspired you to be athletic. Thanks for writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because your Memoir was really interesting to read.
Sincerely,
Kimberly
Dear Oscar
I like that you wrote about something you love to do. I also like the way you spaced your poem and the details you put into this. I also liked how you described how it felt to be in a soccer game it made me visualize that I was the one playin soccer lol. Good Job