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April 2, 2022 6:38 pm

Dear Joseph,

I am impressed by your post, “White Rhinos” because I didn’t know that they are in dangerous species and there are not many of them. Reading that there are less than 20,000 means that there aren’t that many left.
One sentence you wrote that stands out to me is “There pretty much all in South Africa where they are being protected.” I think that is shocking that the population is decreasing badly and that people are making sure they are protected.
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because you saying that there are animals that are in danger of going instinct. I would like you to continue telling other animals that are in danger too.

D’Alessandro

March 15, 2022 5:34 am

Dear Joseph, I am impressed by your post that rhinos are going extinct. But I think that there are more than 20,000 white rhinos. I find it interesting that rhinos are so hard to transport because of how big they are. I feel like these rhinos are endangered because people hunt them for their exotic meat. I feel like if the rhinos are endangered in their own habitat they should just all be moved to a different more safe location their population would probably grow faster.

Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because I like u and rhinos. Thankyou and have a good day.

Christian
March 13, 2022 8:52 pm

Dear Joseph

I am interested in your post “White Rhinos” because I didn’t know that they are in danger species and there are not many of them. Reading that there are less than 20,000 means that there aren’t that many left.

One sentence you wrote that stands out to me is “There pretty much all in South Africa where they are being protected.” I think that is shocking that the population is decreasing badly that people are making sure they are protected.

Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because you saying that there are animals that are in danger of going instinct. I would like you to continue telling other animals that are in danger too.

Christian

March 13, 2022 5:58 am

Dear Joseph,

I am interested about your post, “White Rhinoceroses,” because I knew that white rhinos were being recognized because the married ones were killing them but I did not know that to the point of almost becoming extinct. I think that this is a very serious and delicate issue.

One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “There are less than 20,000 of them left in the world.” I think this is surprising and dangerous because although I think that many people do not care because it is a simple animal, it is very important for humanity.

Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because this topic is very important to talk about and let many people know that this most defenseless animal that we see is very important in humanity. Also, they (rhinoceroses) also deserve help from the people who are wanting to conserve their species.

Jennifer

March 2, 2022 7:00 pm

Hello Joseph
Your post, “White Rhinos” raises my concern about the world because it shows how animals have to be protected by humans from other humans. Having to be forced with the choice to transport these animals from their natural habitat is an extreme measure but sadly it must be taken because of poachers.
Something that stood out to me was when you said, “What they are trying to do is get the Rhinos to safe places where they can breed and grow their numbers away from dangerous poachers.” I see a problem with what you mentioned because their natural habitat should be safe and respected. It is sad to see that now they are facing extinction because humans cannot respect the rhinos’ lives.
Thank you for raising awareness on this issue, and I hope to see more of what you write because of the insight into world issues you provide.

emer
emer
February 28, 2022 2:37 pm

Yes, when one species of animal dies others will be thrown off as well which will corrupt everything.

February 17, 2022 5:16 pm

Dear Joseph,
I was saddened after reading this post, White Rhinos. I think that we need to protect these animals at all costs.
One thing that really stood out to me is when you said, there is less than 20,000 of them left in the world.” this broke my heart because in just a few years they all could be dead.
I think that we need to stop poachers from killing them, otherwise it does not matter how many you try to save and release into the wild they will be hunted again.
thank you for writing this, I look forward to seeing what you write next!

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