I am from Books I read sometimes

Papers that are important to me are all over the place

Electronics I use when i’m bored

Photographs of family

Balls I play and exercise when I’m bored

Foot wares I use to play my games


I am from Parked cars of different brands and companies.

Plants of many kinds

Park full of people

Apartment buildings with different people

Field I play my games

Peoples walking along the streets


I am from Chinese take-out which I’ve never entered .

 Church which is opposite to a baseball field

 Playground I always walk through to exercise almost every day.

Grocery shop I visit almost everyday to buy things

subway station which is always noisy

 bus stop which is like three(3) minutes away from my apartment .


I am from  Elijah a sports addict and a college student

Raymond which is my father

Dorothy a college student

Tunchi a sports addict and a college student

Emmanuel a sports addict

Wendy a catchy little sister  




  1. Ishak 3 years ago

    I think this poem it’s very good because you care about sport and make you helthy.

  2. Lona 4 years ago

    Raymond, this poem is such a great window into who you are and what you care about. Love it…

  3. Grace 4 years ago

    Raymond, your poem has so many wonderful details about the world around you! I liked when you wrote, “Papers that are important to me are all over the place” and “subway station which is always noisy” because they make me feel like I can see and hear where you are. Thank you for sharing your world with us!

  4. Xuefeng 4 years ago

    I think you very like sport. It’s a good thing to makes you stronger. Nice poem.

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