This is my poem about violence and some of the violence that is seen in Romeo and Juliet leave comments if it’s good thanks.
Violence!
Violence creates death
In many ways
We see it around the whole world
We hear gunshots
We hear and see fights
We hear about police brutality
What dont we hear
These days
Some are heart broken so they decide to hurt others
For the purpose to
Make others
feel what they feel
Violence,
Violence does not lead to peace
It just leads to
More violence
And more death
In some cases sadly
What can we do
To stop this?
I don’t know all
I know is that
We should stay away from it
In order that hape peace
In this destroyed world
Of violence.
Dear, Chris
Your poem is really good. I honestly like your poem I like how you chose the topic violence. But from all the things that happened in Romeo and Juliet what made you choose violence? I think you should have explained why you choose violence in your description but overall your poem was really good.
Sincerely, Bryan Moreno
Dear Chris
I really like how your poem explained what is violence and you gave your perpective and your side of the story on violence. Something that you said that stood out to me is ”Violence creates death” because then you explain on why that is true because people are dying everyday. I also really admire how you where repartive in your poem like saying “we” “we” “we” because you are saying like we as in all. Thank you for writing a wonderful poem. I look forward to seeing what poems you write next.
Chris, this poem shows very literally the negativity of violence, and how it affects others. I found it very interesting how you mentioned that violence is started by people who are hurt. I can tell the words you wrote are what you truly feel about violence, and how we don’t know how to end it, but we know its a toxic chain reaction that needs to stop.