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Quadir
April 5, 2024 2:55 pm

Your passage is filled with a lot of information that I think I’ve passed over and could’ve have added to my writing.

Ava
Ava
April 5, 2024 1:38 pm

Aaron G I like how you structured your paragraphs and the title of them in the 2nd paragraph its nice that you described the city map and the difference between the two sides and how the buildings look. I haven’t seen anyone use an observation of the map as an example. Your observation strengthens your point.

Rashad
April 4, 2024 7:12 pm

This was a great essay overall. Your use of the text is informative, yet your own tone of writing makes it interesting. Reading your essay was very enjoyable.

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