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Attribute: Employs a Public Voice
Dimension: Rhetorical Choices
My Strengths:
In my writing, I demonstrate awareness of my audience by providing a clear explanation of AI’s capabilities and limitations. I also draw on personal experience to make the topic more engaging and relatable. Additionally, the language I use is succinct and articulate, and I make an effort to provide vivid descriptions, like “surreal experience” or “too rigid in its approach.”
Areas I might improve upon:
I could further strengthen my rhetorical choices by providing more evidence to back up my claims about AI capabilities and limitations. Additionally, I could provide more examples of how AI has been used in the classroom for students to learn grammar, spelling, and other language tools. Finally, providing specific examples of how AI lacks emotional depth or creative feedback would further bolster my argument.
The language used in this post is very articulate and well thought out. Some of it feels like it lacks a genuine feeling to it like it feels like an AI written post. On the other hand, this further proves the point of what was written.