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Jovana
March 31, 2019 11:48 pm

I like your poem because it’s short and so powerful. Keep writing poems like this one!

Abi
Abi
March 25, 2019 3:58 pm

This poem is authentically beautiful. What caught me was the picture of the train, it was what made me click on this post. As I read the poem I got even more impressed. I love all the elements you added to this, what your home sounds like, what its called and what the community is like. I am glad to hear it is a close knit community, similar to a family. Overall your poem is 10/10, keep writing and I am sure you could make it to 11/10.

March 25, 2019 1:46 pm

I like it. It’s short and real

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