Hasta ahora en el tema de ‘’Pequeña historia de García Lorca’’ me hizo recordar de algo muy importante que casi todo el mundo hace, en libro de ‘’pequeñas historias de garcía Lorca’’ habla de sobre  los sueños de Federico como algunas  personas. Se burlaban de sus sueños él quería ser un gran poeta  un día decidió escribir uno y convertirlo en una obra de teatro, pidió ayuda a sus amigos para poder  llevarlo a cabo algunos decidieron apoyarlo en especial su maestro de literatura, así que la obra se llevó a cabo    todo marchaba bien . Hasta que alguien del publico comenzo a reirse y a la lanzar tomates al escenario eso lo hizo sentir un fracasado, pero su maestro le dijo que eso no tenia porque hacerlo sentir mal que para llegar a ser importante primero tienes que caer muchas veces pero también debes saber como levantarte con más fuerza . Eso me hizo pensar que algunas personas se burlan de los sueños de los demás sin pensar el daño que   a veces haces con solo una palabra que les digas . Yo creo que nunca debes burlarte de alguien al contrario debes de darles ánimos y si puedes, ayudarle a que se hagan realidad. 

Alguna vez te has burlado de alguien ?

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October 28, 2020 10:11 pm

Dear Rosa,
I am intrigued to your post it really grabbed my attention. I like the part where you said “you must also know how to get up stronger.” This helps me that when i fall i shouldn’t give up easily instead i will keep fighting to reach my goals with or without help and support of others.

Sincerely Rosa

March 30, 2020 7:16 pm

Dear Rosa
I am surprised with your publication “Dream but do not fall asleep” because you talk about what happens to a man who tries to achieve his goals in life and also talk that nobody believed in him or his friends this is very significant because the regret of that he kept fighting to get them

A phrase that you wrote that stands out for me is “you must also know how to get up stronger” this implies that he never gave up that he continued to pursue his dreams.

Thank you for your writing. I hope to continue looking at what you write because I found your writing very interesting and I would like to continue learning more about never being serene and of fighting.

March 11, 2020 4:03 pm

Dear Rosa:

I am surprised by your post, “Dream but don’t fall asleep,” because I like your topic. I like all the plots you write. And with this text I realize how people care a lot about what others say.

One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “Some people make fun of the dreams of others without thinking about the damage you sometimes do with just a word you tell them.” I think this is sad because people think that they will not affect others by their words. People are wrong to think that.

Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because I’m interested in kind of posts. I would like to know more about how other people can affect with just words.


March 4, 2020 5:06 pm

Dear Rosa:
I am impressed by your post ‘’Suena pero no te duermas’’ because… you talk about the dreams of Frederico Lorca and how he express his emotions one sentence you wrote that stands out for me is:’’ Yo creo que nunca debes burlarte de alguien al contrario debes de darles ánimos’’ I think this is beautiful because you’re expressing your emotions
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because… you write things about how the writers change the life of the readers.

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