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February 26, 2020 5:27 pm

Estimada Samantha,

Estoy asombrada por tu escritura, porque aprendí que las personas investigan sobre las tormentas de cómo se origen y cómo se va acabar.
Una frase que se destaco en mi fue “ habla acerca de cómo son las tormentas y cuales son sus fases.” es como las personas que trabajan en eso investigan mucho sobre tormentas. Investigan porque quieren saber cuando va empezar una tormenta.
Gracias por tu escritura. Espero ver lo que escribes a continuación porque quiero aprender mas sobre tu escritura.
Por qué crees que algunas personas investigan tormentas y como se van a acabar?

May 15, 2019 4:16 pm

Dear Samantha:

I am interested with your post, “Storms,” because I love when it rains but not when there storms because they can affect the population they suffer damages. Storms are an action in this world muy popular in a lot of countries in this world.

One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “ Algo similar entre mi libro y el mundo es que en el mundo existen muchas personas que investigan acerca de cómo se originan y cómo se va a acabar.” I think this is true and excited because we need people to descubre how to prevent the storm or what do do when there is a storm. They people that study this kind of things are amazing they can tell us when is it going to be a storm or etc.

Thanks for writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because this storms are interesting and I love to know about the nature. We need to know how to prevent them what to do in a storm.

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