I am made of ten alarms to wake up but I still sleep through it🧞♀️.
I am made of karaoke with my friends in Viet Nam, happy and comfortable, drinking juices too🍑.
I am made of a healthy life, enjoying my youth and experience my life (not using drugs or vape)😎.
I am made of watching GaoRanger for five hours a day when i was a child
I am made of becoming top two of class, which i’m very proud.
I am made of a love with soccer in gym period⚽️.
I am made of a bustling house, my mom and I argue everyday like lawyers
I am intrigued by your poem because is how you wrote about the thing you enjoy.
One thing piece of imagery that stands out for me is: “<I am made of a bustling house, my mom and I argue every day like lawyers” I think this is interesting because you described how you talk to your mom a lot.
Your poem connects to my own experience. For me because I talk to my mom a lot and my house can get loued.
Thanks for your work on Youth Voices. I look forward to seeing what you write next because of how you told your poem and just put detail.
I am satisfied with your introduction because i have like 10 alarms too I’m a deep sleeper.
one thing i learned from your writing that stood out for me is “I am made of watching GaoRanger for five hours a day.”I think this is confusing because how can you watch Gaoranger for five hours who even still watches Gaoranger its 2022.
your writing connects to my own experience. For me, because when i was in yemen i used to watch the show Gaoranger too it was a really good show.
Thanks for your work of youth voices I look forward to seeing what you write next because you were really interesting and fun to read.
I was told your name was Juan, or at least that’s what I heard the first time I met you. You are right about not knowing how to spell your name, you kinda forgot I can’t say it either-… Anyways, I am intrigued by how you live with five hours of GaoRanger, I would love to learn more about that. One thing piece of imagery that stands out for me is: “of a love soccer in gym period.” I think it’s really cool, I enjoy playing soccer, too, I wonder how good you are.
Your poem connects to my own experience, for me, I also argue with my mom, I always win, cause I’m always right.
I look forward to seeing what you write next, because it reminds me of the life I wanna have, but can’t. (P.s. Keep the healthy life going, and I’m proud of you, mister! ^-^)