I am made of eating sweet paint chips off the wall as a child and being scared to tell my dad,
and now, I eat the Twix candy everyday in the morning
I am made of my father’s pride because I am a genius for badmitten and won a speech competition in
I am made of flying black and white kites with my family and having a strong bond
I am made of Brooklyn Ocean Parkway this is my favorite place
and, there are a lot of pigeons on the Ocean Parkway they are very friendly to me. 
I am made of my father’s advice, “Don’t pick up anything without permission” and I give this advice to my
friends too.

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November 1, 2022 4:17 pm

Good writing and I like how you talk about the things that you used to do as a child and how it’s been going since you came to New York.

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