In the style of Giovanni.
Rave Poem
the lights when up
the crowd went silent
and the room went dead
when suddenly the lights went up
in vibrant colors
and bright lights ablaze
and the crowd went wild
with amazing energy
and fascinating joy
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Hi Holden! I really like this poem. It has great imagery! It reminds me when I saw Louis the Child, have you ever heard of them?
Holden,
This is a really beautiful poem. It;s like I’m at the rave (even though I’ve never been to one). Thank you so much for sharing.
Ariel 🙂