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My 30 second hook was about my senior project which is police brutality for African-American male

It took me 4 times to had a final cut that sounded great when I was speaking and looking at my audience while I talk to them

In the term the way I was talking was very well manner and intelligent so the audience can be more engage of what I was presenting

I feel my confidence because talking around people builds yourself esteem up to be able to talk



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