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November 23, 2020 7:45 pm

Dear Anaee,
I am intrigued by your poem because i feel like i kind of agree with this poem. i just feel like i’m part of this poem
One thing you said that stands out for me is: “Don’t you remember,
The moments
You said you’d
Stay, be there for me” I think this is interesting because this is exactly like what parents would do and always say and do for you.
Your poem reminds me of something that happened to me. One time I was just hurt really bad and my parents told me the whole time that they would always be there for me and they wouldnt leave for a single second or moment.

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