Dear Youth Voices Community,


My name is Jean Pierre and I attend Fremont high in Oakland. I am working on my Graduate Capstone project and currently need some feedback about my thesis.


My research is going fairly well and I feel like I have a solid project that I am comfortable presenting, but I could still use your support in terms of addressing my main thesis.


This is my current thesis statement about overcrowding in schools:


Having more teachers in schools with smaller size classrooms can have an impact on students learning. Students will get more involved with schools and would want to work.

My questions are, If more teachers were hired in schools with smaller size classes, will there be an impact on students learning? Or will it be the same as if it was an overcrowded classroom?




Jean Pierre

Fremont High School

Architecture & Design Academy

Class of 2018

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