I am from the beach swimming in the full moon near to the train station.
I am from the family moments ,
Where its private.
I am from one blue Toyota , stuck in the morning traffic.
I am from mangu, pupusas, salad , bollitos de yucas,
From my brother Yainel.
I am from those decorations(flower and wall decorations), from nada es eterno.
I am from video games, around the house.
I am from you should believe more in yourself,
Where people notice your attitude toward life.
I am from the dark light of my room, where it feels a safe place to be.
I am from the fried fish of Kaylen.
I am from the Lasagna, Spaghetti and tostones.
I am from the demands and moments, from my craziest family.
I like this poem because you Semi-fruits from your country.
“I am from the dark light of my room, where it feels a safe place to be.” I like this part, because I am also of those people.
The very first line of your poem draws me in because I love the ocean and I love being near it. I am also love the moon so when you mention both the beach and the moon in your first line, I feel like I am write there walking on a beach under the moonlight. I love the title, “Ordinary Life” as your poem communicates how you find beauty in the simple and natural aspects of life.
Your poem has so many wonderful images – foods and things in your home. It also has so many feelings like when you wrote, “I am from the dark light of my room, where it feels a safe place to be.” I can both see and feel your room and I know what you mean – I feel that way about my room too!
I like you say you’re from a craziest family. It’s really funny. And It tells me you like your family. Nice job.!!!!!!!!!!