she shows more of her confidence at the end of the story more then any other part of it.

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I picked this comment because i feel it’s important to know she gained more confidence at the end of the story.
Why does it matter, for you, personally, that she gains confidence?
It matters to me because every woman should/needs to have some type of confidence