Gowanus Market Deli
Welcome to Gowanus Market Deli. Here in Gowanus when you enter the Deli if you look to your left that’s where the candy and the cashier are. And if you look to your right and go up the three-step you will see the chips and groceries and some juices and milk. If you go back down and turn left and go straight ahead you will see the ice cream and soft drinks and soda and juices. And if you want to order food you can go to the cashier and tell him what you want and he will write it down and give it to the deli man and he will make it for you. And it’s a community asset because people come in with their friends and family and get food.
Owls Head Park
I am a hill at Owls Head Park, Brooklyn, and I look over the ocean and people that are walking past me. Sometimes I look at the blue and white ocean. I can see the boats with people taking pictures of me and sometimes families and friends meet and sit and watch the ocean, the blue sky and the blue ocean and sometimes the night sky with me. I am where families and friends gather and stay safe and roll down off of me. I am where squirrels, ants, and birds come and stay on trees and eat.
Rite Aid
Rite Aid Pharmacy Brooklyn, New York, is where you find everything you need. people from around the community come and get groceries and medicine. Rite Aid has a small pharmacy in the back where they have covid shots, flu shots, and medicine, and a professional pharmacist Rite Aid has chips, cereal, milk, juice, and candy. If you need anything, just go to your nearest Rite Aid and get what you want.
Dear Hamman,
I am delighted with your introduction because it was short and specific. One thing that I learned from your writing that stood up out to me is the line ¨I am a hill at Owls Head Park, Brooklyn, and I look over the ocean and people that are walking past me. Sometimes I look at the blue and white ocean. I can see the boats with people taking pictures of me and sometimes families and friends meet and sit and watch the ocean, the blue sky, and the blue ocean and sometimes the night sky with me. I am where families and friends gather and stay safe and roll down off of me. I am where squirrels, ants, and birds come and stay on trees and eat.¨ it was very detailed and somehow very inspiring, I love the way it was written you did a very good job you were specific on your writing.
Thank you for your work on youth voices. I look forward to seeing what you write next because your writing was amazing.
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