I am made of cartoons at my uncle’s house, Puca Loves Garu
And translating my homework from Spanish to English
I am made of an MVP who wins for my efforts in baseball
and for focusing on my studies and my duties so that I ean be someone great in life.
I am made of respecting my parents, being studious , and doing no evil, only good
Park Slope Collegiate, Brooklyn, New York
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Dear Carlos:
I am so surprised with your writing, the way of expressing your writing been in a place without understanding the language.
One sentence you wrote that stands out to me is that you respect your parents the same as I do.
Another sentence that caught my attention was that you watched cartoons as a child because I feel like we did everything, you made me remember my childhood.
I know you like baseball, I don’t really like it but I find it interesting to see other people playing it. I thought you might be interested in this because you talk about it a lot.
I am interested in your writing I like how well it was written because I like how you said ” I am made of an MVP who wins for my efforts in baseball.
One thing that I have in common with you is ” I am made of respecting my parents, being studious, and doing no evil, only good.” I respect my parents and I always try to stay away from trouble and not try to do anything that’s bad.
Overall I liked your writing it was great and amusing, I’m hoping to hear more about what you have to say and hope to see more of your writing, to see what other things you have experienced and felt.