I like my body from head to toe.
I have many part my feet
take me where I want to go.
my long arms come in handy
by getting things and sports.
my body feels good the most time,but sometimes it feel achy.
I try to keep my body healthy
by eating healthy and working out
but sometime it’s sore
for working out but my body recovers fast
all I have to do is get some rest
my body feels best
when I ate a good meal and drink lots of water
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Dear Ziyair,
I would say that your poem “My body” really caught my attention and was really interesting to read and the reasoning why it caught my attention would be because it telling how the body feels or workouts.
One sentence that stand out to me ” my body feels best when i ate a good meal and drink lots of water ” i think that is really stood out to me because it telling how something makes him happy and how body is reacted to get.
Thank you for your poem i would love to see and read for you again.