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Katie, I really enjoyed your short story that you shared with us. This story was very well structured making it easy and fun to read. I also really enjoyed the words that used and the way that you used them. It let me vividly experience the story. I hope to...

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Zoos aren’t cool View Comment
  • @zjerome
  • March 5, 2018

Carter, I have never thought about this as a problem before reading this article. I totally agree that it is harmful for the fact that it places both the animal and human in situations that would never happen naturally. Without placing these animals in a zoo we would never have...

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Alaskan River View Comment
  • @zjerome
  • February 25, 2018

Cole, This is a very good poem. It really allows me to visualize the picture that you are presenting. It really allowed me to see the bear fishing within the river. This was a very good poem and I think that you have the ability to write a number...

Tanner, This is very well written article that deals with a very important issue in today's world. I believe that us human beings are slowly killing the environment and we need to make a change in order to save the world. With the deforestation in certain parts of the world...

Sofia, This is a really well written article that addresses a very important problem within our society. We need to find a way to improve the environment that we all live in. The negative affects that climate change has on our society needs to be shown to everyone in order...

I really enjoyed this article, it made you think about a different type of life other than the ones we have right now. I agree with you that the most logical process to achieving our goal of reaching Mars would be establishing a habitable environment on the Moon. This...

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In 20 Years View Comment
  • @zjerome
  • February 9, 2018

Eduardo, This is a really well written article. I like that you have a dream for yourself and that you are willing to chase for. I also like your line on stereotype line. I agree with you that there will not be peace without people not judging one another. This...

Missy, This was a really cool article. I really enjoyed the way that you wrote it and the quotes that you used where very effective. I also like the way that you look at many different drugs and the effects that each one has on your body and brain.

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Police Brutality View Comment
  • @zjerome
  • February 4, 2018

Noor, This post is very well written. I am glad that your are so passionate about this issue and you are willing to speak out against it. I do think that there needs to be a change in society to make it safe for everybody. This article really made me...

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Gun violence in Philadelphia View Comment
  • @zjerome
  • February 4, 2018

Tyler, This was a very interesting and important topic that needs to be talked about. I liked how you where able to turn this into a video. It was nice to see you go and talk to people in your community and get their opinion on the matter and...

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I know this… View Comment
  • @zjerome
  • January 12, 2018

Khala, This is a great poem! I really like the way you wrote it and the topics that you talk about within it. It conveys a very powerful idea and it makes you think.

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A Monumental Mistake View Comment
  • @zjerome
  • January 12, 2018

Sofia, This is a very interesting article that deals with a very important issue. I really like the way that you have written this article because it brings awareness to this issue that we are facing. I think that you will find this article interesting:https://www.nytimes.com/2017/12/04/us/trump-bears-ears.html

Nyleeah, This is a very cool article and I like it a lot. This is a very prevalent issue that is facing our country today. We do have to make a change in the way that we treat people that are different from us in our country today. This brings...

Tanner, This is really interesting. I have never thought about this problem in this way. I like how you presented both the positive and negatives, because it made me think about it from both sides.

John, This is a very interesting topic and I like how you addressed it. This has been a very prevalent issue in our community and there is not much being done to stop it. It is also nice to see that you are willing to make a change for...

Ed, This is a really cool topic. It is cool to see something written about something that you see in today's culture of the world. Those companies that are apart of this hypebeast culture are influencing the culture of the youth today. It shows the "cool" ways to dress. I...

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How the Brain Craves Sadness View Comment
  • @zjerome
  • October 19, 2017

Max, this was a very cool topic to write on. The brain is something that is very interesting and so vast. I agree on how the brain is almost looking for something to be sad about. I think it does this because it is so much easier being sad...

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MY STORY View Comment
  • @zjerome
  • October 19, 2017

Fernando this is a really good article. I like how you incorporated something that you enjoyed so much. It really gave insight to your childhood and some of the things that you enjoyed as a kid. It made the article personable. I really enjoyed it and hope that you...

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Racism Discussion View Comment
  • @zjerome
  • October 4, 2017

Jesse, I like what you have written and the topic that you have chosen. I do believe that racism will slowly become less prevalent within our society but I do not think that it will ever disappear from our society, even though I wish I could say that it would....

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The Ocean is Filled with Trash View Comment
  • @zjerome
  • September 29, 2017

Darrtell, this is a great topic to do your research project on. This a huge problem in our world and it is not talked about enough and we need to change that. I believe that as humans we need to be more responsible in the way that we take...

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Research Discussion View Comment
  • @zjerome
  • September 29, 2017

Kavi, this is a really cool topic that you have decided to do your research project on. Gun control has been a very controversial topic throughout the United States over the past couple of years. I see the issue both ways and believe that it is someones right to...

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The first Process Journal View Comment
  • @zjerome
  • September 29, 2017

Walter, this is a really prevalent problem in our society today that is affecting many people in the world not only in the United States. We have very bad air quality in Salt Lake City in Utah and it affects a number of people in the valley. I really...

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Does poverty cause crime? View Comment
  • @zjerome
  • September 25, 2017

Javier, I really like this topic and think it is great that you are researching this. It is important to point out the inequality that the poor experience in many states across the United States. They get trapped in this cycle that is very hard to get out of....

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Global warming View Comment
  • @zjerome
  • September 22, 2017

I really like this entry Fred. It is cool how you care about a current issue you like this and how you want to make a change in our society. I really liked the way you wrote and the words you chose. I found this cool article that I...

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