I found it interesting how you infused your piece with your personal opinions. It enhances the narrative and infuses your point of view with your personality…

I really loved this piece. Even though this is a fictional story, it’s something that could really happen in today’s society like it was nothing. I also really liked the picture you included. It’s very simple but emphasizes a lot!

This was very well written. I like the picture you included to express your writing. This was a really deep read and was very different.

I loved how you talked about the things women had to suffer and still are going through today. I also appreciate that you pointed out the high mortality rates among black mothers and infants. Hearing this is just crazy and sad.