Dear Yinetly

I am impressed by your post “Getting Braces: How My Smile Boosted My Confidence!” because it is impressive how one thing can change an entire person’s view of themselves. One small thing can make a huge difference. 

One sentence you wrote that stands out to me is: ” I overthink too much and worry about what I’ll look like afterward. In my mind, I have two sides: one side is fear, and the other is confidence.” I think this is very interesting to see how something so simple as having braces can bring someone so much confusion. One side wants to be happy then the other is scared to see themselves without them. 

Thank you for writing I look forward to seeing what you right next, I like how you put your own take and emotions into your writing it is relatable and is definitely something others have experienced as well Thank you for bringing light to that 

-Juliana Cruz

Dear Yinetly :
I am intrigued by, your post, “Getting Braces: How My Smile Boosted My Confidence!,” because it shows how confidence can be boosted. Also, it showed how braces can help people a lot. One sentence you wrote that stands out is: “I’m ready to finally have a smile that I’m not afraid to show off after 3 long years.” I think this is great because it shows how hard work pays off. Not only that but it shows the difference in confidence as well. Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because you have interesting views. I look forward to more posts.
Ashley Padilla

Dear Yinetly,
I really connected to what you were saying in your post, ” Getting Braces: How My Smile Boosted My Confidence!,” because I feel like I could really relate to some of the feelings you had throughout the process of getting braces. I do agree that getting braces really changes a lot about yourself and makes you feel more comfortable when smiling in pictures or at people.

One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is,” I experienced teeth pain and my gums got swollen, but the orthodontic process has been worth it.” I think this is really relatable because I’ve thought the same way about the pain I feel. I knew that at the end of the whole process, I would finally be happy with the smile I’d get at the end of this experience.
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, and seeing what else we can relate to.

Veronica Morales