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Yehara posted a new activity comment
Dear Clarismar,
I am fascinated by your story, called “Clarismar’s Story,” because I got what are you trying to express about how someone feels when they are been ridiculed for their appearance.
One part of your Story that stands out for me is where the rock asked Marine, the sea lion, if she thinks that the rock belongs to that place. I think…Read More
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Yehara commented on the post, my purpose.
I like how you said that the nature of that place give us relax only watching her beauty. Nice work !!
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Yehara commented on the post, short story
I like this conversation because they are describing how that bridge make them feel with it beautiful structure
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Yehara commented on the post, I walk slowly to go further.
Dear Rocensky,
I am identified with your Six word memoir, “I walk slowly to go faster” because It is similar in some ways to what I am doing right now. I’m working slowly and very hard to improve more in all my objects on the school. But, my goal it’s to go further and be the best in what I expect to be in the future.
One sentence you wrote t…Read More
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Yehara wrote a new post
It’s important to know about me that I always been concentrate on one thing, Success. I born in 2003 on february 4th and I lived in some different places on Dominican Republic, but , the place that I lived more t
Read MoreIt’s important to know about me that I always been concentrate on one thing, Success. I born in 2003 on february 4th and I lived in some different places on Dominican Republic, but , the place that I lived...
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This writing was very nice to read because of the story she tells, she speaks about how she came from a different place and hardly knew english but now she’s confident in her english and is more fluent with it.
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This seems to be a good future to set for yourself, and to see that this is what you want to do even with the things you have to see in life. Being who you want to be even when in fear.
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I love that this is very eye opening. Everyone faces challenges in life but it only teaches you more about life and yourself.
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I love the story about the thief its very eye opening. Its crazy how the least expected can happen. Its crazy how someone can be so cruel enough to hit an elder women! This nation has no respect and its very disappointing and sad! It hurts my heart to hear such a story!