Dear Clarismar,
I am fascinated for your Story, called “Clarismar’s Story,”
Because I got what are you trying to express about how someone feels when they are been ridiculed for their appearance.
One part of your Story that stands out for me is where the rock asked to Marine the sea lion if she thinks that the rock belongs to that place. I think…[Read more]

Dear Clarismar,

I am fascinated by your story, called “Clarismar’s Story,” because I got what are you trying to express about how someone feels when they are been ridiculed for their appearance.

One part of your Story that stands out for me is where the rock asked Marine, the sea lion, if she thinks that the rock belongs to that place. I think…[Read more]

Dear clarismar,
I am fascinated for your Story, called “Clarismar’s Story,”
Because I got what are you trying to express about how someone feels when they are been ridiculed for their appearance.
One part of your Story that stands out for me is where the rock asked to Marine the sea lion if she thinks that the rock belongs to that place. I think…[Read more]

I like how you said that the nature of that place give us relax only watching her beauty. Nice work !!

I like this conversation because they are describing how that bridge make them feel with it beautiful structure

Dear Rocensky,

I am identified with your Six word memoir, “I walk slowly to go faster” because It is similar in some ways to what I am doing right now. I’m working slowly and very hard to improve more in all my objects on the school. But, my goal it’s to go further and be the best in what I expect to be in the future.

One sentence you wrote t…[Read more]

I like this conversation between those guys because they are describing how that bridge make them feel in peace.

I like how you said that the nature of that place give relax to the ones who let it. Nice work!!