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Juan is my grandpa and I have known him as long I can remember because he’s a father to me – my mom came to the United States when I was a baby and my grandparents raised me and I lived with them 12 years. T
Read MoreJuan is my grandpa and I have known him as long I can remember because he’s a father to me - my mom came to the United States when I was a baby and my grandparents raised me and...
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Heymi commented on the post, An Accident in the Street
Dear Zheng Hao Chen
I am happy with your post, “An Accident in the Street,” because it’s really interesting and dangerous.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is “A car’s rearview mirror hit me in my mouth and my face was bleeding. Blood was everywhere on the ground. When I first got hurt I felt really dizzy and then I started c…Read More -
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“You guys need to choose your high schools,” said Ms. Bacouba.
The classroom was quiet and the other students sat at their desks getting ready to choose their schools. My best friends were next to me as alw
Read More“You guys need to choose your high schools,” said Ms. Bacouba. The classroom was quiet and the other students sat at their desks getting ready to choose their schools. My best friends were next to me as always. Fifteen minutes...
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Dear Heymi
I am pleased with your essay, “Big Decision,” because when I was in middle school I had to choose a high school too and I was scared that I was not going to get into a good high school. but park slope chose me and I felt relief
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “I saw that one school was really near my home but it had a bad reputation and people don’t really graduate from that school so I was happy that, that school didn’t choose me.”
I think this is because you don’t want to go to a bad school that is going to cause you problems and I agree.
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Heymi commented on the post, A story about learning English
Dear zhenghao,
I’m happy for your history “A story about learning English” because it’s really interesting because when you were in China you had the opportunity to learn English but you didn’t want to learn English and now you only like to type in English because you think is too easy than Chinese.
One sentence you wrote that stands out…Read More
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Heymi commented on the post, A story about learning English
Dear zhenghao i’m happy for your history “A story about learning English” because it’s really interesting because when you was in China you had the opportunity to learn English but you didn’t wanted to learn English and now you only like to type in English because you think is too easy than Chinese. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is…Read More
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Dear, An oral history of my grandfather. I found interesting your post because I know how the elderly are the most affected by the pandemic, and how many needs they provide.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: ” When he was young he was the president of the Caserio, (a small place where a few people live), and in this Caserio, there were a lot of poor people” because I can see a mans big heart.
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next because you did an amazing job.