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Fellow Oakland District High Schoolers:
Do you play videogames, use social media, watch youtube or netflix? If any of the actions stated apply then you engage in using screen time. Well, you might be
Read MoreFellow Oakland District High Schoolers: Do you play videogames, use social media, watch youtube or netflix? If any of the actions stated apply then you engage in using screen time. Well, you might be wondering, why does it matter if...
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Xavier commented on the post, Traitor Forever?
Thank you so much for reading my blog Michael. I appreciate that you took time to examine my lengthy argument. I had a two questions for you based on your comment. The first question I had was, while reading did you read anything that you disagree with or thought needed more explaining? My second question is, since you are a NFL fan,… -
Xavier commented on the post, Construction is Causing Rent Increase
Dear Melissa, I think that your post was interesting because of the relevance it has towards Oakland to this day. A line that stood out to me was, “Oakland should benefit ALL of Oakland and it’s community members whether they’re low, middle or high income people/households the city of Oakland shouldn’t exclude people because we are all apart of th…Read More
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Xavier commented on the post, Churches In Oakland
Dear Roberto,
I feel intrigued about your post “Churches in Oakland” One sentence that stood out to me was, “To illustrate, Skyline United Church of Christ discusses how everyone is welcome inside the church and how they are not going to be judged.” This stood out because you are really putting churches in a good light and that really helps y…Read More
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Xavier wrote a new post
Nothing is forever, this includes sports teams. Does this mean sports teams such as Oakland’s should leave their hometown? Oakland’s sports teams include the Athletics who play baseball, the Raiders who play foo
Read MoreNothing is forever, this includes sports teams. Does this mean sports teams such as Oakland’s should leave their hometown? Oakland’s sports teams include the Athletics who play baseball, the Raiders who play football, and the Warriors that play basketball....
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Thank you so much for reading my blog Michael. I appreciate that you took time to examine my lengthy argument. I had a two questions for you based on your comment. The first question I had was, while reading did you read anything that you disagree with or thought needed more explaining? My second question is, since you are a NFL fan, what is your opinion on their current situation right now?
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Xavier, this article is thoroughly impressive. You used extensive objectivity and factual evidence tied in with your subjective viewpoint of the problem at hand. As a huge NFL fan, I found this article very relatable and enlightening into the future of team moves and relocation. You had extensive sources to back up your thesis, and your inclusion of the opposition’s standpoint added more credibility as it showed a conflicting viewpoint and its faults. Your trail of logic was very clear and coherent and this continued to add strength and credibility to your point, which you wrapped up beautifully and succinctly.