I love how you stated a lot of facts throughout your writing. Where did you find the stats that you have?

I would like to say sorry on behalf of my classmates. This assignment was clearly fiction, and I'm sorry that they did not see it that way. You wrote this piece very well and I praise you for that. Keep up the good work. But in all honesty, how...

I love your last line. I have been saying this for a while now. How do you think we should go about making sure our communities are treating each other right?

While thinking about what we as a nation could do better, what do you feel our government should help black women during pregnancy?

This is very insightful. You formatted this beautifully. With this being, how do think we can fix some of the things you have talked about

This is very moving. While also being a woman of color, have you had any of your own unpleasant experiences with doctors

I agree with everything you said. How would you fix this? What steps Would you take to make a change?