• The storm clearedThe rain had passedLeaving behind red orange yellow green blue IndigoThe colors fill the evening sky with warmth and artEach color as if it was a different stroke of a brush telling it’s o

    • what a nice way to describe a rainbow, there are a few things you can remove and include but it’s good nonetheless

  • Edna posted an update 5 months, 1 week ago

    “Afternoon sky”
    By Edna Wagaw

    The storm cleared
    The rain had passed
    Leaving behind red orange yellow green blue Indigo
    The colors fill the evening sky with warmth and art
    Each color as if it was a different stroke of a brush telling it’s own story.
    But the masterpiece wasn’t finished yet
    The colors darken
    I look up at this masterpiece in ‘awe…[Read more]

  • Edna commented on the post, Carlos 5 months, 1 week ago

    I can tell your super connected to this piece and it shows through your writing. Great poem!

      • Edna became a registered member 5 months, 2 weeks ago

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