Vinicius, I don’t live in Hawaii, or anywhere close to it, but based off of everything I hear about it, it must be a beautiful place. This poem is very good and I like how you started off early saying how incredible Hawaii is. Then later on you transitioned into explaining the issues and challenges that Hawaii is facing and having your call to action. I also really liked your last line “We are fighting for change.” I think it is simple yet powerful. Our planet and taking care of it is a big topic right now and this was a really good way of showing how you can take care of your own state.