• VictoriaF
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  • @VictoriaF
  • December 8, 2020

Peyton, This was a very interesting and compelling read. It really added to the content that you used personal examples. The connections from your personal examples to the point(s) that you made really made your message clear to the reader. I also enjoyed the topic choice and thought that...

Molly, I love the writing style! This is very spot on and I agree with your take on this prompt. The way in which you approached this is wonderful I couldn't agree more with you about the power that our words hold. The impact that our words can have...

Empathy in Celebrity Relationships View Comment
  • @VictoriaF
  • November 3, 2020

Peyton, very interesting to read and a unique example of the importance of empathy. I think, for me, the best synopsis of the point you were trying to make is your last sentence, nicely done. I agree with how harmful and toxic it can be to be lacking...

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