Peyton, This was a very interesting and compelling read. It really added to the content that you used personal examples. The connections from your personal examples to the point(s) that you made really made your message clear to the reader. I also enjoyed the topic choice and thought that your writing on it was concise and thought-provoking.
Molly, I love the writing style! This is very spot on and I agree with your take on this prompt. The way in which you approached this is wonderful I couldn’t agree more with you about the power that our words hold. The impact that our words can have are is often overlooked, as you pointed out, and that is very unfortunate.
Peyton, very interesting to read and a unique example of the importance of empathy. I think, for me, the best synopsis of the point you were trying to make is your last sentence, nicely done. I agree with how harmful and toxic it can be to be lacking empathy in a relationship. Whether it is from your partner or others relationships are definitely…Read More