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Vesna commented on the post, Curious George
Dear Miguel,
First off the title caught my eye and seeing how it related to your piece was really interesting. I grew up watching Curious George so I know for a fact you grew up watching a ton of PBS. This is also where a lot of documentaries are broadcasted which was an interesting connection between the title, “Curious George” and your pas…Read More
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Vesna commented on the post, Be who you want to be
Dear Kris,
Thank you for sharing this piece. Not a lot of us knew this about you and I’m happy you shared. I think your a very independent person but at the same time able to crack joke and be the energy of the group. I think this stems back to your experience in middle school and it’s interesting just to see how much soccer has impacted you as…Read More
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Dear Chava,
I liked the concept of your comic. I can relate as to when me and my brothers fight we don’t talk. Rather than soccer we play basketball or a game of 2k to settle disputes. Thank you for sharing this piece.
P.S. Had to post twice cause I didn’t log in the first time.
Sincerely,
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Vesna commented on the post, Lonely Friendships
Dear Rosario,
I think everyone who had a trip felt isolated at first so in a sense you weren’t alone. You had nice illustrations and I enjoyed reading this story from you. Let me tell you about embarrassing moment #3, I cried the first night of my trip because I was really homesick. But as time went on, I formed relationships with the people a…Read More
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Vesna wrote a new post
Its’ calm
Peaceful,
A sense of euphoria rushes through my spine
As a blast of the ocean breeze grazes my face,
The water below along with my Pride (my ship) are in perfect harmony
Both still,
The sky r
Read MoreIts’ calm Peaceful, A sense of euphoria rushes through my spine As a blast of the ocean breeze grazes my face, The water below along with my Pride (my ship) are in perfect harmony Both still, The sky resmembles a tangerine A perfect afternoon as...
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Vesna, those three minutes I spent reading your lovely poem was the only right thing I did today. I liked how you used specific words like “the sky resembled a tangerine” where I could create my own illustration of your poem in my mind. This poem reminds me of the saying, “nothing lasts forever” where something can go right to terribly wrong in a matter of seconds. Keep writing Vesna, I look forward to reading them soon.
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Dear vesna,
I really liked how you put together this written piece. It almost makes me think about how there are many obstacle courses life decides to throw our way, but we continue to fight and make it out stronger, wiser, and smarter than before. I love how you use the connection of your feelings to the way the color of the sky changes to go along. It’s like the world knows what you are going through and is being empathetic. I hope you continue on with your journey and preserve to be a great person. -
Dear Vesna,
Damn.
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Dear Vesna,
This piece was very visual. As I continued to read I felt this story come alive, I was able to see the colors and tragedy you experienced. This piece was really dope, hope to see more of your work in the future. Never stop writing loser. You have the mic, don’t let it fade away.
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Vesna,
I loved your writing because it is more complex than just finding a lens. I think this piece of writing has to be thought about way more to actually be able to connect to a lens simply because it has been thought about really well. This poem I think is all together a metaphor to something that can be simply said. This shows me how much you have pushed yourself as a writer.