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    Velvet commented on the post, Stop Drinking and Driving

    Hello Fahar,
    Thank you for reading our post we really appreciate it. Thank you for the feedback that you gave us.
    To your question honestly what I think about this topic is that it is wrong because not only the person drinking and driving is getting hurt, but the people around them are also getting hurt. Itś selfish in general because when there…Read More

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    Dear Life Academy Parents,

    We are writing to all parents of the school Life Academy. Our goal is educating families on how to take care of their kids/themselves. Drinking while driving has been a huge issue in

    Stop Drinking and Driving

    Authors Dear Life Academy Parents, We are writing to all parents of the school Life Academy. Our goal is educating families...

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    • Hello everyone.

      My name is fahar and I am a student at Fremont High School here in Oakland. I just read your project blog post and I have some feedback.
      One thing I liked about what you wrote was that you used good detail and you supported your claim with good evidence. And i also like how you talked about how the issue has gotten worse over a long period of time

      Something I have a question about is what do you think about this .

      Thank you for sharing your project!
      fahar

      • Hello Fahar,
        Thank you for reading our post we really appreciate it. Thank you for the feedback that you gave us.
        To your question honestly what I think about this topic is that it is wrong because not only the person drinking and driving is getting hurt, but the people around them are also getting hurt. Itś selfish in general because when there is someone is drinking and driving, they make the choice to put themselves in danger by driving and the people around them too. This also increases the deaths, and accidents going all around the world.

    • I think what made this article very powerful and influential is that you give a lot of accurate and precise evidence.One thing I would change is that we want more of your opinion and also that you have to dive in more deep in the topic.

    • Hello,
      My name is Miriam. What I liked about your post is that you’re talking about things that need to change.I also like how you’re doing info meetings about drinking and driving. One question, why did you decide to write about this?

    • Hello,
      My name is LaDaysha and I think this is a great and important topic that should be address better.I think that you should go into more detail about your plan.A question I have is how do you think the best way to stop this madness?.I like the fact you added statics and data.

    • Hello my name is Norberto Something that i like about this blog was that the author gives a lot of evidence and explained it really good I also like how you are doing information meetings a question that I have for you is that why did you decide to write about this?

    • My name is Jeff and I am from Oakland Unity High School something I liked about this article is how you put many statistics about the deaths of drunk driving. A question I have is do you think only parents are affected by drunk driving or other ages to ?

    • Hello,
      My name is Dante and I am from Oakland Unity High, I like this article because it is very powerful, I also liked how you wrote a lot about this topic so you can get this message out to everyone. I want to ask a question and want to know if it’s okay, has something like this happen to you before with a family or friend?

    • my name is kevin and i am from oakland unity high school and something I like about this would be that you used a lot of evidence and a question i got would be how else can you bring awareness

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    Human Experimentation: Is it ethical to use data from Nazi medical experiments?

     

    Around the time 1930s, the Nazis would do many sorts of experiments, but these experiments were not due to animals, they were d

    Is it ethical to use data from Nazi medical experiments?

    Human Experimentation: Is it ethical to use data from Nazi medical experiments?   Around the time 1930s, the Nazis would do many sorts of experiments, but these experiments were not due to animals, they were due to humans. These experiments were done...

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    Dear Cristina,
    thank you for taking the time to read my post. I look forward to see more of your comments

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