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    “In The united states of America the flow of education is stagnant, the Common Core system currently in place is, outdated, ineffective, and a waste of precious learning time.” 

    In our expository writing class

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    "In The united states of America the flow of education is stagnant, the Common Core system currently in place is, outdated, ineffective, and a waste of precious learning time."  In our expository writing class we just finished writing an extensive...

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    In my expository writing class we are researching different topics with the intention of writing an essay on our individual topics. I am going to research the benefits and disadvantages between, Traditional

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    In my expository writing class we are researching different topics with the intention of writing an essay on our individual topics. I am going to research the benefits and disadvantages between, Traditional school, year round school, and home schooling...

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    wen is a duck not a duck?

    -wen its a truck

    Wen is a cat not a cat?

    -wen its a bat

    Wen is a bat not a bat ?

    -wen its  a cat

    Wen

    wen is a duck not a duck? -wen its a truck Wen is a cat not a cat? -wen its a bat Wen is a bat not a bat ? -wen its  a cat

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    • Thank you for this moving piece, Trip. I thought it was very thoughtful. I really enjoyed the rhyming and repeating question pattern that you use throughout the poem. I think your stylistic spelling of ‘wen’ really adds something original to your writing. I would love to hear more from you as an author. Good luck on your future writing.

    • This is an incredibly inspirational poem. “wen its a cat” incredible.

    • I agree. This poem has changed the way I look at life. I love how it addresses current controversial topics in this nation. Thanks for this insightful experience.

    • This poem is amazing. After having read it all acne departed from my face. My grades got better. My reading level increased. When anything is stressing me out I simple recite your poem to myself and I feel better. When life intimidates me and tries to scare me into hiding, I stroll along, unaffected, boldly exclaiming, “wen is a bat not a bat? wen it’s a cat.”

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    Trip commented on the post, Venomous Water

    I agree that work to help flint trailed off to a minimum as soon as media attention moved elsewhere, there needs to be a continuous effort to change the pipes and restore the quality of water. I would ask, what do you think should be done? What steps could be taken to do this?

  • I agree with what you have written and I think it might be interesting to add that money makes the game more violent and therefore too intense for a college student. The size difference between an NFL player and an NCAA player is frighteningly large but there must also be another reason for this difference in play style and amount of injuries.…Read More

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