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Should the bullet train be built?

The bullet train is a high speed train that is specially designed to travel twice as fast from point A to point B than a car, engineers are looking to build this bullet train in California, by building the bullet train will make the U.S stated appear higher due to the transportation diversity. The bullet train had not being built […]

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Pros and Cons of the Bullet train.

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Public transportation infrastructure in California.

The bullet train is a high speed train that is specially designed to travel twice as fast from point A to point B than a car, engineers are looking to build this bullet train in California, by building the bullet train will make the U.S stated appear higher due to the transportation diversity. The bullet train had not being built […]

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video of 30 seconds hook.

File_000 My 30 second hook was my senior project hook which was about fixing the transportation infrastructure in california and how California plans to spend $67.6 billion to build a bullet train instead of fixing the transportation infrastructure. Before the final video I had to record myself 9 times before i got it right. I believe that my oral presentation […]

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Effective Eye Contact and Body Language for an Oral Presentation

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Practicing Tone and Inflection to Make My Voice Engaging

  For my third recording i chose to read a newspaper that was written by fremont high student talking about how unfair the school system in Oakland is.  I feel pretty good about my recordings they are solid and they took me awhile to get them right. Print this page. Author Tomas

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Exploring My Relationship with Oral Presentation

I recently watched 2 videos on public presentations, the first video i watched was called “TED’s secret to great public speaking” and it talks about what goes through  your mind when you are about to present and it explains in a very visual and detailed what you want people to listen to when you are presenting, the human brain is so complex […]

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My Oral Presentation.

  I feel embarrassed because I sound sick but I feel somewhat confident about my content in the recordings. I am not that confident with my oral presentation yet but I will soon be okay with talking into my phone and posting it online. For my third reading I chose a small chunk of reading from the article called ‘ […]

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Recreating Cassio’s Stabbing

  When I started making this, I did not know what to do. I eventually started watching YouTube videos on how to be creative, and then I went back to the scene when Cassio got stabbed and I started imaging it on how would I recreate that scene and this is what I came up with. From this XP I learned […]

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The Wrath Of Brabantio

“Iago: Call up her father, Rouse him:– make after him, poison his delight, Proclaim him in the streets, incense her kinsmen, and, though he in a fertile climate dwell, Plague him with flies. Though that his joy be joy, Yet throw such changes of vexation on’t as it may lose some color.” ( Act 1.i. 71-77) Analysis:  Iago is referring […]

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My recording for Othello

I chose to read the lines of act 3, scene 3, lines 323-333, it is when Desdemona lost her handkerchief that Othello had given her and Emilia stole it to give it to Iago. I chose to read these lines because i feel like this was the turning point to the whole love story that Othello and Desdemona had, i […]

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Analysis on Why Othello is useful for teachers.

I have reason to believe that teachers still use Shakespeare to teach students the old English and show students how it was to talk English which is now known as ‘old English’. By using the old English teachers give students resources to search up the word and the background of the word, for me personally  used etymology to help me […]

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Letter to my friend Do

  To the YV community, this is my response to the Warm-Up for English class today. We are studying Shakespeare’s Othello and exploring the theme of appearance versus reality.   ***************************   Dear Do,   I just found out you did not come to school today and I saw your grade for Ms. P’s class. You are not doing so […]

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Looking for feedback on my research thesis

Dear Youth Voices Community, My name is Tomas Beltran, I am a senior at Fremont high. I feel pretty confident about my research so far, I felt like it was pretty easy to find valid and important information because my project is kind of a big deal in California, but i would be glad to take any feedback on my […]

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Requesting help for my research.

  Dear Youth Voices Community,   My name is Tomas Beltran I like to play soccer and play some basketball.   The social inequity problem I am looking into is the bullet train construction in California. The demographic group I am most focused on for this inequity is the farmers because they produce most of the food for California, This […]

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Stop the wars and bring the money home

Dear Mr/Mrs President, I would first like to congratulate you on your great victory. I would like to ask you to take action on our economy, like for example lower the taxes a bit or don’t let big projects like the bullet train get our taxes high because now we have an economy of a third world country , what […]

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Checking the evidence on a Wikipedia article about California’s High-Speed Rail

I just read a Wikipedia article: “Route of California High-Speed Rail.” – Wikipedia, the Free Encyclopedia. N.p., n.d. Web. 15 Sept. 2016. I read this article because it talk about the bullet train which is the topic i’m going to be focusing for the senior project. I felt like this article was really helpful because it talked about the routes […]

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