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    My 30 second hook was my senior project hook which was about fixing the transportation infrastructure in california and how California plans to spend $67.6 billion to build a bullet train instead of

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    File_000 My 30 second hook was my senior project hook which was about fixing the transportation infrastructure in california and how California plans to spend $67.6 billion to build a bullet train instead of fixing the transportation infrastructure. Before the...

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    Effective Eye Contact and Body Language for an Oral Presentation

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    For my third recording i chose to read a newspaper that was written by fremont high student talking about how unfair the school system in Oakland is.  I feel pretty good about my recordings they are solid a

    Practicing Tone and Inflection to Make My Voice Engaging

    https://www.youthvoices.live/wp-content/uploads/2017/05/I-Wish-I-Could-Go-There.m4a   https://www.youthvoices.live/wp-content/uploads/2017/05/That-Was-So-Fun.m4a For my third recording i chose to read a newspaper that was written by fremont high student talking about how unfair the school system in Oakland is.  I feel pretty good about my recordings they are solid and they...

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    I recently watched 2 videos on public presentations, the first video i watched was called “TED’s secret to great public speaking” and it talks about what goes through  your mind when you are about to presen

    Exploring My Relationship with Oral Presentation

    I recently watched 2 videos on public presentations, the first video i watched was called “TED's secret to great public speaking” and it talks about what goes through  your mind when you are about to present and it explains in a...

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  • You had a solid start, just work on your spelling and grammar or have someone check it for you. Elaborate on your evidence because is kind of unclear what racial group you are talking about unless you are talking about everyone which is very broad because police brutality can happen to latinos, asians, europeans etc. also cite your evidence and…Read More

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