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    What an awesome way to take an almost ridiculous correlation and expose the sense and truth of this concept. I was drawn to your writing when you included the local Atlanta transportation system, MARTA. I feel as though that was an easy way to bridge the gap and connect the similarities of Atlanta to Philadelphia. I really enjoyed your…Read More

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    Free from Chains & Blocked Lanes

       The scene of a typical Atlanta expressway, filled with cars streaming towards their daily destinations. At first glance, this may not immediately evoke thoughts of slavery. However, viewing this traffic congestion through the lens of literary analysis, particularly...

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    • This image truky pulls me into this post. I also like the title you chose to get straight to the point of the topic.

    • I was drawn to this post because of the photo and its art style. I enjoyed your connections between Atlanta and Philadelphia, as they are major cities located at opposite ends of the country. Also, I appreciated your definition of redlining, it allowed the rest of the paragraph to be easily digestible. The mention of deep-rooted patterns in America is an idea I agree with as well. Do you think there is any hope for Philadelphia to become less divided?

    • The layout of this article is very organized and I enjoy your use of headers. The introduction to your text is strong and sets a good tone for the rest of your writing. The art in your cover photo is what drew me to this post.

    • I feel like the connection you draw between systemic issues like redlining and urban segregation is thought-provoking. Examining the historical legacies of slavery and segregation offers nuanced insights into city planning complexities. Your comparison of urban planning challenges in Atlanta and Philadelphia highlights broader American city governance and development struggles. Also, I was very drawn to your cover, It’s so colorful and unique it’s beautiful. I’m curious about your thoughts on potential solutions to address historical injustices’ ongoing impacts on urban planning. What steps could communities take to promote more equitable development, addressing issues like gentrification and affordable housing?

    • Your take on Atlanta’s traffic congestion and its reflection of historical urban planning issues . I want to talk about your explanation of redlining and how its impact brings light on the divisions within the city. Similar to your comparison between Philadelphia and Atlanta, the shared challenges faced by cities across America, emphasizes the need for inclusive and equitable urban development. Your analysis is both enlightening thought provoking. I chose this because Hearing terrell speak on politics always is something insightful and genuine.

    • The cover picture you have is really captivating, I had to click. However, I was not disappointed with the writing either. This passage was beautifully written, the language, the information. I think the writing may be a little short for subheading but I like the approach, overall great work!

    • I think it’s interesting how you relate structural problems like urban segregation and redlining. Analyzing the historical legacy of segregation and slavery provides complex insights into the challenges of urban design. Your comparison of Atlanta’s and Philadelphia’s urban planning issues brings to light more general issues with American city government and growth. In addition, your cover really caught my eye because it is so lovely and different-looking. I’m interested in your opinions on possible remedies to the problem of historical injustices’ lingering effects on urban planning. What actions may localities take to address concerns like cheap housing and gentrification in order to encourage more fair development?

    • This piece offers a fresh perspective on the bustling Atlanta expressway, prompting us to consider its connection to historical events like slavery. Through literary analysis, it highlights how urban planning decisions and segregation have shaped the city’s landscape. As someone who doesn’t live in the South, I found it intriguing to see similarities between Philadelphia and Atlanta’s urban planning challenges, showcasing broader trends in American city governance and development.

    • It’s interesting how you linked the systemic problems of redlining and urban segregation. Knowing from the previous historical legacy of segregation and slavery provides more insights into the challenges of urban design. I liked that you decided to incorporate in some connection that you. You are right in Philadelphia and in Atlanta they both face similarities.

    • This image truly pulls me into this post. I also like the title you chose to get straight to the point of the topic. The combination of the compelling image and direct title effectively captures the reader’s attention. Your ability to convey the essence of the subject matter concisely is commendable. Well done in creating an engaging and focused introduction to this piece.

    • Terrel, I love the cover (dolle) of your work. I wasn’t able to make mine even close to as good as yours lol. What did you put into AI to make your cover? I love how you connected how Philly is to how Atlanta is. It just goes to show how predominantly black cities are. You did beautifully <3 Keep up the good work!

    • I like the fact that you compared Philly with Atlanta because I didn’t think I would see a comparison between the 2 and it was very unique. I also like the way you described redlining and then went into a quick overview of how it affects Atlanta. Both your image and your writing are very unique and I think they complement each other. I would like to know what styles motivate you to write like that?

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      This essay deftly makes the connection between historical backdrop and modern urban landscapes, illuminating intricate socioeconomic challenges in an engaging way. The comparison of Atlanta and Philadelphia gives context and depth and shows a thorough awareness of the unique difficulties associated with urban development in various geographic areas. All things considered, it’s a praiseworthy investigation of the ways in which literature and historicism might enlighten our perception of contemporary reality.

      Question: How do you think increased awareness of the historical roots of discrimination in urban planning can inform future approaches to creating more equitable cities?

    • Your reflections on the impact of historical patterns on today’s urban landscapes offer a valuable perspective. It’s evident that you’re considering the deep-rooted issues of segregation and discrimination that persist in cities like Atlanta. Your comparison between Philadelphia and Atlanta shows a keen observation of urban planning challenges and similarities across different regions. Your insights into issues like gentrification and affordable housing highlight your understanding of the complex dynamics shaping cities across America.
      What strategies do you think cities like Atlanta and Philadelphia could implement to address issues of segregation and promote more inclusive urban development? How might community involvement play a role in shaping the future of these cities?

    • Introducing Redlining is a great way to represent what is happening to our cities and how this topic needs to be talked about. The way out flow the words into each paragraph and also labeling your paragraphs also shows you have split up the good parts to talk about the main ideas on what we should be focusing on.

    • You did a good job providing an analysis of how Atlanta’s urban landscape reflects the nation’s troubled history of slavery and segregation. The comparison to Philadelphia further highlights the common challenges faced by many American cities in balancing economic growth with preserving the cultural heritage and accessibility of their communities. Overall, you really thought about how the deep-rooted, systemic factors that continue to influence the lived experiences and spatial organization of urban environments.

    • This displays Your observations regarding the influence of past trends on contemporary urban environments provide an insightful viewpoint. It’s clear that you’re thinking about the pervasive problems with prejudice and segregation that exist in places like Atlanta. 

    • I like the way you first introduced redlining so people who are reading can understand what is going on in our cities. I also liked the way that you chose a intricate photo. The flow of your words really keeps people reading.

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