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I remember forgetting to put on a mask before putting on my hijab I remember there were only 2 people allowed in the elevators due to COVID I remember eating a lot at home because I was super bored I remember my parents buying so much food so we don’t run out I remember people fighting for toilet paperI remember I didn’t see not […]

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Midnight Books

“Books!” Chuckled I, “yes books”I woke up and flung the hold“Books!” Said I, “thing of pound”Once I sat engaged and waiting By the grave, I saw the scriptures My passion is the material instrument Books — tormentor of my dreams Once upon a midnight lonely  Print this page. Author Tasneem

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Is he taking a showe I’m quite confused here?

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Does he mean bleeding like a period in the uterus

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I think the poem is about the memories in the Ohio spring, and how the “echo it comes back” i think he’s trying to say he can hear the memories.

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If I Stay–What would you do if you had to choose?

Spoil Alert If I stay by Gayle Forman is about a seventeen-year-old female who lives with her Mom, Dad, and her seven-year-old brother named Teddy. At seventeen Mia Hall realized that she has the talent to play cellist but her most difficult decision she would ever have to make would be whether to pursue her musical dreams at prestigious Juilliard […]

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What happend if he wasn’t Christian and he wasn’t saved will they still be okay with that

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I think it’s about how he found god even though he was born a Christian, and how he is afraid to commit a sin

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I feel like some whit people haven’t affected anyone but they may be part of the problem

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Yeah i agree

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I feel like he believes that education is more important

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He is saying that he considers himself a wicked person.

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Basically he wasn’t surprised because it was the same as usually

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I think this poem was about him finding god

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I agree

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“White Man's burden” was the duty of white men to bring education and salvation to people around the world that he deemed uncivilized.

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I agree

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Yeah

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Yeah agree

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Yea i agree

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Yeah true

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I think he’s trying to say that they are all older now and that he doesn’t recognize them since its been years ever since they hung out

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I feel like after fonny gets out of jail he should thank Sharon and Tish for helping him and not giving up on him

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I think they are talking about the girl that took fonny to jail and left to Puerto Rico but I’m not sure

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I like how Tish’s mother is also worried but she doesn’t want her daughter to see that so she keeps supporting tish

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Yeah true

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True , agree

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Exactly

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I agree because what if the person that is wrong wins and he isnt telling the truth, its not fair, the person who tells the truth should win not the one who is lies. But I’m not worried because karma is going to come

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Yeah i agree

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Yeah i read about this story before it was really sad especially after that he suicided in his parents house in the Bronx

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Yeah i agree

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I dont think Tish’s mom is disappointed,i think she was just shocked and relied on SIS to get married first

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Frr like Where else would they go

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Yess exactly,i agree 100%

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Awwww yesss her father approved

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Frrr

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That’s the whole point we dont know yet we have to wait and read 😊

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Best sister of the year

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Lmaooo she’s so funny

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Uh oh this sounds bad , is he going to yell at him,give him a lecture,etc WHAT IS HE GOING TO TELL HIM 😱

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Correction its supposed to say FONNY

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And he knows that fonny is a good person and he loves tish

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But if they did have money and a house i think that would be fine because she older then 18

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So like he just swollen it so quickly that he didnt even tast it . I’m shocked 👁 👄 👁

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Tish’s father is doing an amazing job asking Fonny theses questions and if i was a father I would’ve done the same thing because I wouldn’t want to send my daughter off to someone not responsible,so I would ask as much questions as possible to know him.

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Ooo i love this conversation ,Fonny is not going to let himself down 😎

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Exactly and Tish’s mother is always so supportive unlike fonnys mom

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Aww i just cant wait till they have a baby and get married and hopefully fonnys mother won’t interfere with negativity

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Yeah i agree

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I dont think she’s mad i think she just wants an answer

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I dont like when she said the older sister should get married first because what if the oldest isnt ready for marriage and the youngest is. Your obviously not going to hold up her time because the oldest isnt ready

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Yeah, but if his daughter is pregnant already then there shouldn’t be a problem getting married

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Yeah i agree i feel like Fonnys mothers is going to ruin everything as well

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This is a sign that they are meant for each other and will become great parents and can get married

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I feel like Fonny thinks that since hes in jail Tish will find a new lover and love someone else and he’s prolly worried

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Omg someone pls tell me who Sharon is I forgot ???

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Oh he sounds scared 👀

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I’m trying to figure out if he was sarcastic or was he serious or was he being rude

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Yeah i have the same question

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So she’s basically fake

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I feel like fonny will be an amazing father

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The End of Her

In the book The End of Her by Shari Lapena many emotions occurred during the time I was reading this book. The genres in this book are Mystery, Suspense, Thriller, Psychological thriller, Psychological Fiction, Domestic Fiction. This story takes place in upstate New York, where Stephine and Patrick adjust to life with their colicky twin babies. Suddenly Patrick’s Former lover—ERICA—from […]

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Aww that’s sweet , I love honesty

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I kinda disagree because I feel like it’s doesn’t matter if you are the youngest or the oldest because if your are ready to get married and you want to then you should

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That means they woke up extra extra early

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Wow I wasn’t sure if i was able to finish reading this doesn’t need no elaboration

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I can tell that Baldwin likes to describe his words very clear so that they wouldn’t ask for elaboration

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This sentence had me dead 😂

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Tish is already 3 months pregnant

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I thought she was pregnant and wants the baby what is happening……. help

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Awwww they truly love each other

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For a second i thought that was her father talking then she was like “he puts his hands on my breast” so ummmm guys thats not her father right

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It seems like she’s sad about herself and others

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Due to my understanding, i think MRS.hunt is being really rude especially towards her own son like seriously?. She basically wants her sin to be in jail and she thinks that he was the reason. I agree with her that he should remember his Sins and go back

To god or Jesus ONLY IF he did something wrong but he didnt. He was just protecting Tish from getting harmed. Print this page. Author Tasneem

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Yeah she does because she knows that even if there was danger around they still got each other

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Good question

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Yeah true

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I feel like fonny and tish are very similar because they sometimes scrutinize things and speak there mind

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What does she mean outside the world like in space?

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Is it official its a boy ? I’m 😞…. — lost

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Yeah true

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I agree

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TISH SAFE?

I think tish is referring to how she feel uncomfortable out side because she can be in danger knowing that she is a BLACK and outside there Is more white people and they can harm her without getting in trouble >because it was white privalge.so she feel more safer inside knowing that there wouldn’t be harmful word attacking her and […]

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I think Tish is referring to how she feel uncomfortable out side because people like to shame other for there looks so she fell more comfortable inside and safer because anything can occur to them in a bad way because she’s BLACK. 😞

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I guesss at there time lol idk

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If you read on top he was asking her if she’s hungry so they can get food thats why he said “do you have money” 😊 i hope this helped

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I feel like this is one of the themes about this book is protection because they are always protecting each other

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Yeah that was sweet

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Yes thats true i agree

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This sounds spicy like what is he trying to do distracted her/be nice /or is he trying to make her fall in love with him

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Because she’s talking about her love life 👀

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I mean duh your like 17 😂 when started dating fonny

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I really like fonny because he was just him and doesn’t impress Tish so she can fall in love with him. Especially lknowing that Fonny didnt have nice clothes and smells a little weird and had greecy hair tish still loved him

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It seems like all they want is for each other to be happy and Tish and Fonny really love each other , and i bet you they are going to fall in love more after they have a baby

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This shows that fonny loved her for you she is not by her looks like her body and just use her, he really cared for her

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I really find there relationship healthy because they didnt fall in love just by the looks and for s*x they fell in love because they cared for each other and ,made sure each other was happy

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I think she’s talking about the baby she’s going to have and how she didnt see that coming (the baby )

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Seems like her dad wasn’t impressed

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Ernestine kinda seems like she’s jealous that Tish is getting loved more then she is and then Ernestine says “she ain’t going to forget it” she saying that Tish isnt going to forget that she’s a good girl and that her father loves her

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Even though Tish said some harsh things about Fonny you can still see that she loves him truly

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How can a church be handsome?

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Why did he say we have to be nice If he was the one that was forcing fonny’s family over

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Why did tish mother wink at ernestine

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Honestly really impressed that her family is supporting her because she is only 19 years old and many families wont support so I’m happy that she is surrounded by good,positive,loving energy

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Even her SISTER is being so nice and supportive

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This was so heartwarming, seeing her dad care for her and supporting her all the way 😢

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Yes exactly 😊 😢

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I agree with Tish sometimes it isn’t always easy being a female 😂

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Yeah but he was forcing Fonnys family to come over

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Because he got fonnys family to come over

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Tish’s father joe is forcing them to come over and he isnt asking them for there consent, its more like hes demanding them to come over

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If the sisters were busy her mom wouldn’t invite them over

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Awww thats so cute future father in law telling his son in law that 💜

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This is why we shouldn’t assume things and start thinking in other peoples point of view

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Damn thats tough

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I think her father is worried about Tish and just wants her to be happy

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This must be hard on not the family only but especially Fonny because he is going to be a dad and he is in jail for something he never did

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Yeah thats true in fact other people that you hang around and know you they actually know more things about you then you know about yourself .

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I really liked this sentence because most people tend to overthink and If you spend your life following something infinite you will exhaust yourself and die; because knowledge is infinite, life is finite.

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I can answer that for you 😊

Fonny is in jail because a white man harassed Tish at the market and he defended her against the man’s advances, only to come to the attention of Officer Bell. Fonny is in jail because a system of laws wields and upholds racism. I hope this helped Print this page. Author Tasneem

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Yes I obviously agree

Alcohol can cause problems for the developing baby throughout pregnancy, including before a woman knows she is pregnant. Print this page. Author Tasneem

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I really hope Tish isn’t about to drink cause she’s pregnant

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Seems like her dad wasn’t impressed

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Why is she apologizing when he spit on her face first

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She sounds like sis is about to do something

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This is so relatable

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I wonder what in it

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I can see that tish’s mother really cares about her and wants her just to be happy

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When they say the lords house do they mean church since they go there to talk to god or worship him or something?

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This is what a healthy relationship look/sounds like, it a taking care of each other unlike fonny and his mothers relationship.

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I wonder if Tish felt hurt by the way Mrs.Hunt said she looks nice TODAY but not every other morning

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I feel like I’m hearing the water sparkle

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It’s like James is manipulating us to hear what tish is hearing

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Baldwin writing about MRS. Hunts shoes making sounds its like he is giving us a chance to experience it and be there when we are just reading

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The word ROSE was it a lot in paragraph 3 and 4

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Baldwin makes the word like we are hearing it its like we can hear it ,experience it ,and relatable

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I don’t know why but i feel likeMrs. Hunt dissent even care about what happend and just cares about herself.

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Mrs. Hunt is staunch in her Baptist beliefs, and yet she treats both Tish and Fonny with scorn.

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When Tish says SIS she means her older sister Ernestine

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Tish and her mother

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I agree that she might be depressed but i dont think she is currently really depressed she might just had a really tough life especially knowing that Tish is 19 years old and falling in love and getting pregnant Print this page. Author Tasneem

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Did she make Tish tremble because she looked better in dressing or ….?

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He was probably sweating from his scalp because he was nervous 😂

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This shows that Tish and her mother had a good relationship

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What does that mean “Blessed Quietness,” and why does that remind them of fonny’s mother

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Just wanted to remind you that the author is James Baldwin 😊

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Her mother is very supportive of her and she wants fonny to have more courage

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She seems like a really good person and she just wants Tish and Fonny to be happy , she knows that if fonny gets a baby hell be more happy knowing that, the baby is his

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I’m kind of confused here when she said ill didn’t give him what he needed, like what do men need?

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I wonder what will her mom and sister reaction will be

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Isn’t that what most people wear to go to church high heels. (Mmmm maybe thats just a stereotype).

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I thought that people can only be baptized once when they are little or when they are older

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That was so deep and i can relate to Tish and Fonny when she said “whoever loved us was not there” because they are times where I’m feeling lonely and the only people that love me and make me smile agin aren’t near me

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That must be awkward and i wonder why they didn't talk to each other moreover why they didn't even LOOK at each other.

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It seems like tish is hating on fonnys mother as well 😂

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If fonny hatted it why do you have to hate it and be frightened.

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Why is it on Sunday that people are good and Saturday the people are bad ?

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I think he means that there true “love” isnt true and its not working out correctly

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Was he that bad that he didnt go to school only if there was someone with him

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This shows that they are lucky to make love and are grateful because not many people can fall in love and laugh

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Why did he say ill bring the lord then he says he is the lord ? I’m kinda confused here

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I agree she was probably scared that she gave him a lockjaw and afraid of what he will do.

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What does frank mean by “Frank was to say to me, much later, “she leaves in the hands of Lord.”

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For those that are wonder baptists insist that only believers should be baptized and that it should be done by immersion rather than by the sprinkling or pouring of water.

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Due to my understanding,Fonny is the problem now he is making it very awkward especially when his mother doesn’t even like Tish

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Teasing the girl behind the bar is harassment. They shouldn’t make females feel like they are in danger and feel scared because men are approaching them very inappropriately

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This sentence struck out to me because its sad that the kids have to be slapped and rush home before the men come

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It seems like MRS.Hunt is becoming nicer

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Seems like the mother looks better and younger 😂

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Yeah that was weird and confusing

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I wonder if his loved ones are as concerned as he is

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That’s probably what he thinks he is

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I believe that this moment was really awkward for them

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This is rape because she is crying and calling Jesus because she doesn’t want to have sex

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Why does fonnys mother doesn’t like tish. Has Tish done something that Fonnys mother didn’t like ?

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I wonder if his mother was really okay with the “date”

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Yeah I agree that was a bit weird

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This makes me think that she reminds him of his mother maybe because she is a female and she loves him like his mother does

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This shows that her dad wasn’t abusive and loved her trully

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Cardcaptor Sakura by Clamp

So far in the story there is a fourth grade girl named Sakura. The story takes place in the fictional Japanese city of Tomoeda which is somewhere near Tokyo. Sakura accidentally releases a set of magical cards known as Clow Cards from a book in her basement, created and named after the sorcerer Clow Reed. Each card has its own […]

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I agree

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This is just my opinion but this sound kind of sexist . because they are expecting the boys to do better than the girl ……..if i got that right

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Haha i agree it did sound weird but i wonder what he meant by that 😬

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This made me think that he has irresponsible friends because they are smoking and that is bad for the lungs.

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There isn’t actually freedom even if they were celebrating it because no one is free and till this day there are still racism going on

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Midnight Books

Is he taking a showe I’m quite confused here?

Does he mean bleeding like a period in the uterus

I think the poem is about the memories in the Ohio spring, and how the “echo it comes back” i think he’s trying to say he can hear the memories.

I agree

If I Stay–What would you do if you had to choose?

What happend if he wasn’t Christian and he wasn’t saved will they still be okay with that

I agree

I think it’s about how he found god even though he was born a Christian, and how he is afraid to commit a sin

I feel like some whit people haven’t affected anyone but they may be part of the problem

Yeah i agree

I feel like he believes that education is more important

I agree

He is saying that he considers himself a wicked person.

Basically he wasn’t surprised because it was the same as usually

I think this poem was about him finding god

I agree

“White Man's burden” was the duty of white men to bring education and salvation to people around the world that he deemed uncivilized.

I agree

Yeah

Yeah agree

Yea i agree

Yeah true

I think he’s trying to say that they are all older now and that he doesn’t recognize them since its been years ever since they hung out

I feel like after fonny gets out of jail he should thank Sharon and Tish for helping him and not giving up on him

I think they are talking about the girl that took fonny to jail and left to Puerto Rico but I’m not sure

I like how Tish’s mother is also worried but she doesn’t want her daughter to see that so she keeps supporting tish

Yeah true

True , agree

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