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The Street We Walk View Comment
  • @Tasneem
  • March 18, 2021

Dear Luisa, i really enjoyed reading your poem and I think you did I an amazing job describing New York City in your own perspective. I can actually say i agree with most of what you wrote. GREAT JOB !!! One stanza that stood out to me was “ Walking...

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Along Manhattan Avenue View Comment
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  • February 10, 2021

Dear Mbathio, the reason why i chose to reply to your poem is because it stood out to me the most. I can say that everything you wrote i agree because that’s what goes around her in Manhattan (New York in general) One stanza that stood out to me...

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The Street We Walk View Comment
  • @Tasneem
  • February 10, 2021

Dear Luisa, i really enjoyed reading your poem and I think you did I an amazing job describing New York City in your own perspective. I can actually say i agree with most of what you wrote. GREAT JOB !!!

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The War in Yemen View Comment
  • @Tasneem
  • January 15, 2021

Dear Ebrahim, I’m also from Yemen and i am really happy that you spoke about this because the media nowadays ignores the important stuff and they decide to talk about things that aren’t going to impact and benefit our lives.

Baldwin is very good at explains what he is writing, it’s almost like hes giving you a vision of seeing this by only hearing or reading the words . For instance he wrote , .His tongue, his teeth on my breasts, hurt. I wanted to throw him off, I...

This comment is meaningful because some students were saying that Tish is too young but if you realize Tish is 19 and almost an adult. Additionally EMMANUEL also agreed and comment “you shouldn’t depend on the older sibling to get married first for you to get married because at...

This stood out to me because the way fonny said “ “Want to get married,” confused me and I’m pretty sure others might think the same way as i did. I was also wondering if Tish understood what he was trying to say. However both Tish’s mother and father...

This comment was important to me because some people think that they shouldn’t get married because they are to young , yet Tish is about to have a baby , so it doesnt make it much of a differenc.

I am shocked about your post because not many people talk about this topic and i think its a very important topic. One sentence that struck out to me was ,” Travel requires the desire and willingness to adapt to new cultures. In some occupations, it is essential to be...

I re wrote it because there was grammar issues but this is the one you should read Dear Issy : I am shocked about your post, “Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets ,” because when I started reading I saw that you wrote that Harry Potter is rude.One sentence...

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Dear Issy : I am shocked about your post, “Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets ,” because when I started reading I saw that you wrote that Harry Potter is rude. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “ One, he is rude. Two,...

Dear Issy : I am shocked about your post, “Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets ,” because when I started reading I saw that you wrote that Harry Potter is rude. One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is: “ One, he is rude. Two,...

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My Name View Comment
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  • November 23, 2020

Wow thats was amazing. My name is Tasneem and it’s also Arabic and i used to think my name was weird but now i know that its a beautiful and unique name. Just remember the quote “why blend in when you can stand out”!

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Can TikTok break friendships? View Comment
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  • November 10, 2020

Dear ,Diana I am delighted that you spoke about this because many people are afraid to talk about this kind of topic when they are the most important topics to talk about. “ Can TikTok break friendships? ,” because not only can tik tok break friendships but it also...

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Save the World View Comment
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  • October 6, 2020

Dear Selena, I am attentive about your post , “Save The World,” because we live in a society where people don’t take care of their environment. One sentence you wrote that struck out for me is: “ We want healthy air and clean surroundings when we go out to...

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