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Stephen commented on the post, Anne Loftus Playground
Dear Angelina, its awesome that you have a place that holds so many memories for you and is so nostalgic. Its also cool to know that i’ve been to that park your talking about, its a couple of stops from my neighborhood.
I really loved the photo of the sun, being partially blocked the dying branches of the winter tree. It was an extremely…Read More
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In my neighborhood, there’s this place called “The Trivium”. It is also referred to as “the triangle”, “the paterno” and “the old lady island”. It is basically a triangle shaped strip of sidewalk
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Stephen commented on the post, Guitar player from DR
Dear Ariel,
I’m happy to hear you love playing guitar because I’m the same way, sometimes i feel like all i want to do is play guitar for the rest of my life. It’s cool that you’re very straightforward about your academics, it shows you have a lot of determination when it comes down to what you care about/are invested in.
A sentence that stood…Read More
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Stephen wrote a new post
My name is Steve. I’m a musician, actor and poet. I was born December 16, 2003 in New York City and grew up in Washington Heights. At an early age I discovered a love for acting and in fifth grade I acted i
Read MoreMy name is Steve. I’m a musician, actor and poet. I was born December 16, 2003 in New York City and grew up in Washington Heights. At an early age I discovered a love for acting and in fifth...
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Stephen wrote a new post
If I said I was from a place that no longer exists,a place that gave existence to so manywho still do and still don’t,would you know where I’m from?Where I’m from,I’m shaken and waken at 6:00 in the morning
Read MoreIf I said I was from a place that no longer exists,a place that gave existence to so manywho still do and still don’t,would you know where I’m from?Where I’m from,I’m shaken and waken at 6:00 in the morning,I...
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Dear Stephen,
I am amazed by your poem because it describes a regular day for teens. One way is when you described how most teens feel when we go to school. I like the way you described this process with a lot of detail and i look forward to reading more of your poems. -
Stephen,
Wow, this is a great poem! Not only is it well written and structured, but it is something that many teenagers can relate to. Your description of how you feel going to school everyday is something that many of us feel. I appreciate your honestly in your poem. Thank you for sharing.
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Steve! You’ve revised your bio so much over the course of the weeks! Your tone is generous and reflective, and you share your serious interests and preferences.
I loved reading what you came up with, and following your version history as you warmed up to the occasion of introducing yourself.
Kiran