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    Stephanie commented on the post, Unexpected

    Hi Joce,

    I loved your poem. I think it is super strong and well written. I liked that you were able to open up and talk about a time that was difficult and how you handled that. The part that stood out to me the most was the part where you took initiative and called your dad then visited him even if it wasn’t as planned. It says a lot about who…Read More

  • Hey Fany,

    I really liked your piece because I feel like its something you don’t really share about yourself. But, I also know that it is a big part of who you are and your identity. I like that you focus so much on your family but, this also has to do with where you identify. I wish you would have talked more about the difference of you living…Read More

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    Stephanie commented on the post,

    Hey Yaqui,

    I really enjoyed reading you comic. I admire how bold you are to share such a hard time in your life. I couldn’t imagine what that felt like. Panel number three was extremely powerful to be because the stairs were leading up to a pitch black room. I saw that as symbolism for what you could have been feeling, like alone or just empty on…Read More

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    When I hear the news

    “Sister I’m pregnant”

    My jaw dropped

    I didn’t know how to react.

    I was excited

    Worried for my sister.

    Happy to be an aunt.

    Curious.

    Boy?

    Girl?

    And as the nine months went by

    I

    I Promise to Love You

    When I hear the news “Sister I’m pregnant” My jaw dropped I didn’t know how to react. I was excited Worried for my sister. Happy to be an aunt. Curious. Boy? Girl? And as the nine months went by I was still Excited Worried And curious. I...

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    • Hey Stephanie,
      I really like the vulnerability in this piece. I love how you describe the setting and the emotion because I can really picture the moment in time this is happening. For example in the line ” I promise to love you Gael” has a lot of depth and raw emotion to it because of the way you described things at first. I also connect with this poem because I have a nephew I show unconditional love to the way you show Gael.

  • Hey Saul,

    I really liked your piece because it made me smile since I can totally imagine this in my head. Anyway, your picture of the broken arm was really good. I like that you talk about the bond that you and your brother have and how the love between you two created this love that you have for soccer. I could sort of relate to your comic…Read More

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