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Sri rated 5 stars Clementines
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Srinidhi commented on the post, Clementines
I like your alliterations. I like the descriptive terms like windows of white and peel away my anticipation. I think they give nice imagery.
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Srinidhi wrote a new post
Read MoreI thought I’d awaken to a sky of silver. Heavy clouds covering the shining snow river. But there’s something bright and it makes me quiver. Something magical in the sunlight, nothing that could make me shiver. - I see the wispy clouds wisp away. Across...
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I like how it rhymes and that you use the last words to contradict the second part of your poem. I like how thoughtful and vivid this poem is. I could imagine parts of the poem in my mind.
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I love this, I love the way your words flow and the imagery I get from the first half
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The ryming makes me moan
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Dear Srinidhi,
I like that you used a smooth transition from one topic to another it was very flowing and simple.
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Sri! I love this! Your diction and syntax are impeccable. I love the beautiful image of nature you create and the message of hope and regaining confidence. Continue writing!