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Is Your Society Impacted! View Comment
  • @ShaniaB
  • April 11, 2018

Dear Lilian, I appreciate the feedback you gave me because this shows that people actually read what I post and this makes my blogs better. I like how you explained why you like certain parts/quotes in my post because this tells me you might of had some connections or...

Dear Joana, I really like the fact that you were really detailed in your writing about the animal testing because animal testing is a big deal. Especially because scientists and doctors are killing them. “There are laws that protect animal cruelty” I like this quote because most people wouldn’t...

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Consent View Comment
  • @ShaniaB
  • March 23, 2018

Dear Daniel I like how you was talking about the human and animal testing, but how you introduced henrietta lacks in the situation. I love the fact that you stated “ The doctors didn’t tell the family or the patient. They kept the family in the dark. “Scientists have...

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Nazi Human Experimentation View Comment
  • @ShaniaB
  • March 23, 2018

Dear Manuel Mercado I love everything about what you wrote because it is true. It also explains the what the nazi’s did what they were doing their actions for. You state “The nazi’s contucted painful and deadly experiments on thousands of concentration camps prisoners without their consent” this is a...

Dear Saul, I really like how you introduce yourself in the beginning because most people just be like hi my name is and then start talking about their life and where they come from. I like the fact that you gave a meaning of your name because most people don’t...

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My Name 2018 View Comment
  • @ShaniaB
  • February 21, 2018

Dear Gerardo, I really like how talked about your family but mostly when you explained yourself. One sentence that really stood out to me is “ I am who I want to be and my name has helped me become who I am and continues to represent me “ because...

Thank you so much and I really appreciate everything you said about my creativity on my shadow box.

Thank you for giving me feedback and the 2 hands on my shadow box represented half of my ethnicity and that it shouldn´t be judged. And because people assumed that I was only african american so you should judge or assume others people race because of how they look.

Thank you Fahar I really appreciate the things you said and Hopefully we can meet again. I remember you from garfield we were bestfriends. Thanks again for the comment.

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Is Your Society Impacted! View Comment
  • @ShaniaB
  • February 14, 2018

Dear Lilian, Thank you for commenting on my writing. I also want to thank you for giving me feed back on my creativity because no one else really do besides my teacher and my family. I am going to write more about our community because itś something I like to...

Dear Mario, I loved everything you talked about because healthcare is important but, it is hard to get it if you an immigrant just like what you said. I agree with you when you stated “However it is difficult for illegal immigrants to have access to healthcare because they get...

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Police Brutality View Comment
  • @ShaniaB
  • November 17, 2017

You are right about this because police don't give people a chance to do what they ask. They are so quick to shoot and kill somebody or take them straight to jail.

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Gun Control Inquiry View Comment
  • @ShaniaB
  • November 17, 2017

I totally agree with everything you are talking about. People shouldn't use violence for everything, they should't use it at all.

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Do They Compare? View Comment
  • @ShaniaB
  • October 18, 2017

Dear MiAngle, I really like your writing because it makes a lot of sense and you gave so many pieces of evidence/ facts. A sentence that really stood out to me was “Kneeling doesn’t effect how the team plays it might affect their paycheck but that’s a risk that...

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Leaders, A Letter about Teenagers View Comment
  • @ShaniaB
  • September 13, 2017

Dear John, I agree with your post because that's what exactly happening in Oakland and in other places. I mostly agreed with you when you said "As a teenager in America there are teenagers 14-19 that are dying by drama, police brutality, and school shootings" because all people want...

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