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    Fat girl,  fat girl I heard all the jokes

    Fat girl this, fat girl that ohh you’re so fat that…

    I heard all the “advice”  oh you should not wear this shirt

    it makes you look bigger or wearing black m

    Fat girl

    Fat girl,  fat girl I heard all the jokes Fat girl this, fat girl that ohh you’re so fat that... I heard all the “advice”  oh you should not wear this shirt it makes you look bigger or wearing black...

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    • I am excited about your poem ”Fat girl,” because there are people who only say things as if they did not know that the other person can hurt, everyone in this world is equal we have to respect ourselves because we all have the same rights, not everything depends on a sculptural body or a pretty face.

    • Wow your poem “Fat Girl” is uplifting to all girls out there in the sense that because you are different to what society finds acceptable or beautiful, doesn’t mean you are anything else. Your poem was very eye opening to a lot of what we find acceptable and favorable like skinny girls. All girls are beautiful no matter the color or shape, and we shouldn’t be judged for anything less. I think you would enjoy this poem about body empowerment https://onedio.co/content/24-empowering-short-poems-from-feminist-poet-rupi-kaur-12146
      Much love

    • Oh my goodness Shakia! Your poem called ” Fat Girl” is so inspiring and really hits the point of not being ashamed. I really connected with this poem because I can relate of being ashamed of myself. But this poem really helped me show myself that I am who I am and I should love myself, no matter my size. Because I learned from you that sized does not matter. Thank you and you did an amazing job.

    • Dear Shakia:
      I am touched by your poem, “Fat girl,” because as a big girl myself I agree with everything you have wrote. People have also tried to give me “advice” on being a big girl.
      One sentence you written that stands out for me is, “Or she will only get a role in the movie as the funny fat friend, Sidekicks,” I think this is accurate because if there is a female role it is also a skinny or fit girl. People only see fat girls as a joke and nothing else.
      Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because I agree with your point of view and fat girls should be allowed to do the same things any skinny/fit girl can do. People should stop and think that their “advice” can hurt people.
      Osiris

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