I think this post is very interesting. I think it’s interesting that you brought up the topic of the cost of college and the fact that people change their majors at least once before graduation. Here’s an article you may find interesting: https://www.nytimes.com/2015/09/13/magazine/is-college-tuition-too-high.html

Colin,
I found this very interesting. I liked how you gave strong statistics at the very beginning to draw in the reader. I also liked how you talked about the causes at the end and then gave reasoning for why the drinking age should be 18 to prevent binge drinking. You may find this link helpful: http://www.indiana.edu/~engs/articles/cqoped.html

Jaden,
This was such a beautiful poem. I really like what your class/ school is doing with the songs about yourself. I enjoyed how you talked about your big family and how it has shaped who you are as a person. Great post!