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Shirley commented on the post, Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince
Dear Kevin,
I decided to search “Harry Potter” because well, I’m a HUGE HP fan. I’m really glad you decided to write about this absolutely AMAZING book! There are going to be many surprises, that you just won’t believe. I really like the books because they’re full of exciting adventures and… I just love fantasy books. My favorite book is The…Read More -
Shirley commented on the post, STOP IT! Our Lives Are At Risk Too!
Dear Priscilla,
I strongly agree with your post. Animals are being hurt and harmed. What have the animals done? Many animals are going endangered and its mostly because humans are breaking their home (Such as chopping off trees when bird’s have their home/nest on the trees!) and killing animals. I mean would you want to see your house get removed…Read More -
Shirley commented on the post, Make Our Community A Better Place
Dear Siera,
I strongly agree with your post, police are harming innocent people, and its gotta stop. Everyone’s lives matter and everyone’s life is equally important. Just because we are a different race it doesn’t mean we should be treated differently. Thanks for sharing your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next. (Which is…Read More -
Shirley wrote a new post
Dear Future President of the United States,
Before I say anything else, I would like to congratulate you for becoming the new president. I have a couple important issues from our country I would like to talk
Read MoreDear Future President of the United States, Before I say anything else, I would like to congratulate you for becoming the new president. I have a couple important issues from our country I would like to talk about with you....
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Dear Shirley,
I really enjoyed your post I agree that our country needs to be safe. Great job Shirley -
Dear, Shirley
I really agree with I see T.V and i heard a bomb killed lots of people and I feel like this happens everyday, I’m really glad you brought this issue up. -
Hi Shirley,
I liked the topics you brought up here. I particularly enjoyed how you said “Immigrants are just as important as American citizens.” This really brings the whole immigration issue back to human rights and human dignity. I would like to know, however, do you have any suggestions for immigration reform? The candidates this election have very different opinions on immigration, and finding a balance that satisfies and respects all people, both American and otherwise, is hard to do.
As for protection of the people, I agree completely. Again, do you have any suggestions on how to achieve this? What has worked in this past and what hasn’t worked? It, like immigration reform, is all about a balance that brings about the best results for the most people.
Thanks for the great insights in your post. I enjoyed reading this. -
I really like how you brought up two important issues in this letter. It is clear you are passionate about both. I like the things you said about immigration. It is a very important issue that needs to be addressed. I agree with everything you said. Also, I really liked how you brought up terrorism. It is a serious problem that I believe needs immediate attention. Thank you for expressing your concerns.
I like how you really elborated on your topic. It is specific and I really enjoy it. Great job Shirley. I really enjoyed reading this.