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Sarah commented on the post, The Murder Animal Mystery
Dear Riudy
I am shocked by your post, “The Murder Animal Mystery” because I was unaware that animal murders or mass murders were an existent crime.One sentence you wrote that stood out to me was “‘The donut delivery guy?”‘ I think this is a clever added detail because as you’re reading the text you dont expect a complete turn of events.…Read More
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Sarah commented on the post, It’s All Around Us, We Just Don’t Always See It.
Dear Caitlyn,
I am shocked by your post, “It’s all around us, we just don’t see it” because I was completely unaware of the fact that people get trafficked in different categories.One sentence you wrote that stood out to me was “…the woman narrating it walked into the store, picked up a bag of frozen shrimp, and realized it was one of the…Read More
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