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  • Thank you for your post! I really enjoyed your This I Believe essay. I agree that you need to work hard and have dedication to accomplish any goal that you have. I liked your personal story and think it is a great example of hard work and dedication. I think your story is very relatable and makes your audience connect with you and feel what you…Read More

  • Conor,
    Thank you for your post! I really like your This I Believe essay. I agree that having self confidence is necessary for you to succeed. I think the personal story you told in your essay helps your audience connect with you and understand your opinion. I connected with your story because I also find in sports it is necessary for you believe…Read More

  • Zach,
    Thank you for your post. I enjoyed reading your essay and I feel the same way. I’m also a huge procrastinator and I find it very hard to start anything unless it has a official deadline. I also feel the stress you talked about in your essay. In my opinion the toll stress takes on a person is a ramification. Thank you for your post!

    • Sara, thank you for your amazing This I Believe essay. I like that you told a story about your grandpa serving and how he was not thanked for his service because I was heartbroken to hear that and it created a lot of emotion which gave me a desire to listen more. It’s unfortunate that many people take our freedom for granted but you understand that it was not given to us for free. Your family seems incredibly patriotic and I respect that a lot. Your closing is outstanding and I enjoyed listening to your This I Believe essay. Thank you for your post.

    • Hi Sara, my Grandpa served in Vietnam so I feel that both of our grandpas could relate to not being appreciated by their country. Your essay was well communicated and I think you should do audio essays more. I agree with Nick, your conclusion was great and I think many people will appreciate your post.

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