• Hi Lupita, I thought your piece was very well written but I would have to disagree with you. One point is that making something illegal or “banning” it doesn’t make it disappear all together. For example several drugs are illegal to obtain but people still get them. How? The black market. If guns were to be banned people would still be able to…[Read more]

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  • Greetings, Owen. I like your flow and style.

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  • in a game of clash royale yesterday,I summoned a minion horde to my opponents dismayand now I feel this game is too easy child’s playwith the might of all my attacks his tower started to swayand it looks l

    • I like the way you rhyme and how you end each line with a Y

    • Dear Saheth:
      I am Intrigued by how interesting you made a game sound your poem, “A quick match,” because You explained what was happening during this game, and not only did you make it interesting you made it have rhythm.
      One line that stands out for me is, “and now i feel this game is too easy child’s play” I think this line is interesting because once you see that the enemy is taking damage you think it’s going to be a easy match but once you see that the enemy counter attacks you get startled and then realize you need help .
      Another line that stands out for me is, “and an enemy pekka is coming this way and now i need help may-day” I think these lines is contradiction because you state on your title that it will be a quick match, so you start off stating that it is indeed going to be quick and easy but then it turns out that you are getting out played, and then turn out to lose.
      Your poem reminds me of a poem that I once read. I once read a poem that seemed to be about mushrooms, but come to find out it had a deeper meaning behind it and the author sylvia plath kept contradicting herself by saying we are meek, but then saying No one stops us
      Thanks for your poem. I look forward to seeing what you make next. Make it interesting again.

  • I disagree with this point of view. I believe that being unhappy with current circumstances is not a problem, in fact I think it is a solution. I think that being unsatisfied is part of human nature. Being unsatisfied is a driving force for innovation and improvement. Think about an athlete who competes in the Olympics. The athlete wishes they are…[Read more]

  • I Agree with this article and I believe that President Donald Trump is making a more perfect union. Since he is following through with the goals that he promised to do as a president I think he is using his executive power in a good way.

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